New Plot!!

Welcome back!
  I left the last blog post with a cliff hanger because why not? This time i will briefly explain why we have planned for our new plot!
  Our setting is a futuristic society in which everyone is extremely attached to their phones. In credit scene, we are gonna have people either talking about insignificant things or not even talking at all. To establish that this is going on everywhere, we will have actors that speak different languages. In the actual film opening, we will have a group of friends in that same society, hanging out. They're having conversation that is insignificant, not making any eye contact, and constantly on their phones. They all get a text message that is unknown and it reads "*main characters name* dad has died, watch video!" The main character looks away from her phone and no one seems to be phased by this. They all click the link and the main character starts screaming. We show one of the phones and it says "watch now" flashing on it and the person clicks, then the opening ends.
Feel free to leave comments on what you think of the plot as of right now! I'd love to hear your feedback!
Until next stop,
Isa